Disney haiku

These are the haiku texted on my phone while waiting in line at Big Thunder Mountain Railroad (a small roller coaster at the Magic Kingdom), now preserved for posterity. ;-)

So many people.
Maybe Tokyo feels like this
with island breezes.

Yes, I will likely
write many haiku for you.
In line, boredom reigns.

Torrential angst pours
with sweat drips into this phone
...still your silence grows.

I will die here with
visions of small choo choo trains
burned into my eyes.

Bury me under
that red rock around the track.
Let my son go twice.