concrete poem effort

[falcongrrl]

     Fox       yips
     its sharp cry
    needful. Feed
    me. Your warm
   smell moves on
  each velvety breeze
 and I long to lick and
smack and bite. The
whole woodland gleams
luscious around me. See
my black nose sniff, tail twitch with
 every imagined delight. Touch me to
 see how good I can be. Yip yip yip.
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(with help from this site: http://www.wild-about-woods.org.uk/elearning/concretepoetry/ )

Comments

[finch]

Concrete poems are so fun. I like all the descriptive words you used, too.

[gramina]

That's *very* nicely done!

[falcongrrl]

Thanks!